Thursday 20 September 2012

My thoughts

I really enjoy having this blog. I really do. Here is a story that I made up when I was bored. Once upon a time there was a unicorn. It's name was Corn-Feild. It was shaped like corn. It lived in the village of corn yard. It gave all the towns people corn when there fields ran out. The end. You probably think that was a boring story. Well if you post a comment on my story maybe you can change it around a bit so its more exciting.
By Lily
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 September 2012 at 08:56

    Maybe add a desease that happens to the corn and they go hungry to match your speech

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  2. Anonymous20 September 2012 at 15:10

    maybe you should make that into a story than

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    1. Anonymous20 September 2012 at 16:39

      You just gave me a great idea!

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    2. Anonymous20 September 2012 at 16:41

      With the fishy's on the internet you can't see the blue fish!

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  3. Anonymous27 September 2012 at 19:13

    I like your story, but I wish it was longer!!

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    1. Anonymous27 September 2012 at 19:15

      This comment is from Mum. xxxxx

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