Tuesday 30 October 2012

My poem

Today I had a rotten shoe

Today I had a rotten shoe as I went to the loo
It was horrible! Horrendous! A disgusting sight!
I think I should throw it away. I might!
But why? Why was it wrong?
Why did people say ‘ Hey you! You pong!
There was nothing wrong with it -  I thought.
So, that was a great lesson I was taught!

By Lily

(P.s. I changed a poem by ken Nesbitt and I changed it around.)

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